You’re gonna have to change the descriptions for Orena and Egresil, as their God descriptions/functions contradict some current lore. Namely, as can be seen in The Gods of Erranor (current pantheon), Egresil’s function overlaps with our Death God, Cessaruvant’s, role. Additionally, Orena’s position as creator of the world overlaps with our previously established creation lore, as can be seen in Mana and Magic.
Other than those two, everything else seems good! We’d have to request you resolve those overlaps and then let us know so we can canonize it.
Seeing as the God stuff has been clarified, this post has been approved and added to the Masterpost!